I absolutly love this poem! it's so unique and crazy! at first i was like what a minute that makes no sence then i noticed the whole poem was like that! wonderful job this is just awesome!.

~Jacklyn

Whoa i've never seen/read a poem like this before! It was real spooky but made me laugh a lil, it was awesome u should write more like that!

Wow! very unique!! i love it and you get a 5. I agree with both weeping wolf and jacklyn! very amazing.

This was definetly worth reading. A good break from the typical style on this site. Great poem
Sarahxxx

Mmmmm....this is VERY dark. It was pretty good though. The rhyming seemed forced in some places but otherwise great job. i give it a 4/5.

Much Love
~*hAilY*~

Its good... its a lil weird... but i cant tell you have some sort of talent there.. keep up the good work
take care of you
amanda