I think its great....awesome job...keep it up!!!!

healing_wounds

Yo i think thats an excellent poem keep up the the hard work

YAY THE WRITTERS BLOCK IS OVER! im happy that its over..cuz i love reading your work! by the way this is angel of sweet misery AKA Katie..Just thought ud like to know..anyways..your poem was AWESOME! i really liked it..very well done!

Stay strong!

Much Love,
katie

Nice poem, i can relate

Great start. I like the style of this and nice form...tell me when you finish please :)

"night, life
just on more fight
get out my knife
I’ll make a sight" - *one (more fight)

"run, hide
locked inside
no time to being kind
your turn to shine" - Shouldn't it be "no time for being kind?"

Take care.

xxx

Excellent. i loved it even if it wasnt finished yet. it was great