I read this poem from two different perspectives, the first was reading it from the writters perspective, having loved someone enough for them to cause that much pain... i'm sorry if that happened to you... the second was from a readers perspecitve, although very dark you wrote about the anger so well and made it seem so real, as i read it i was slowly getting angrier and angrier...
well done, i liked it alot

*jackie*

Very good poem. its very dark, but it has so much emotion in it, its really really good. i like the structure too, it makes the poem even more interesting. well done. i love it.