I love this poem. its so good. this is the part i liked the most
I come to you now, holding my
heart and soul and my most
secret intimate feelings,
in the palms of my outstretched
hands, i stand before you
unprotected and vulnerable.
I love that part. thats ounds like some thing i would do for the guy i love. well anyways 5/5 keep up the great work!!
and if you get some time do u think you could vote and comment on my poems it would mean alot to me
Hey abbe i miss you!!! i reallylike this poem...me n paul are sorta kinda back together but we technecly cant be but you know...i called you the other day and i cant call you bc your dumbass mutha...so give me a call on my cell you knnow the # and my new home phone is 1-207-457-3914kk love you bunches
BABE!!! i miss you so much...sry bout skewl it will get better soon...you know im goin to a new skewl soon but i have a fellin its gonna be the shit....but you need to keep ya head up high also...hope to seee you soon!!! i love you forever!!!
Hey Gabs, I've finally have time to return the favor of commenting on your poems. I greatly enjoyed reading this because it held truth. When one does out stretch their arms like that, its a very large chance. And you found a great way to put it all into words. Well Done : )