Comments : I came to you

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I love this poem. its so good. this is the part i liked the most
    I come to you now, holding my
    heart and soul and my most
    secret intimate feelings,
    in the palms of my outstretched
    hands, i stand before you
    unprotected and vulnerable.

    I love that part. thats ounds like some thing i would do for the guy i love. well anyways 5/5 keep up the great work!!

    and if you get some time do u think you could vote and comment on my poems it would mean alot to me
    kaylee

  • 14 years ago

    by staci

    Hey abbe i miss you!!! i reallylike this poem...me n paul are sorta kinda back together but we technecly cant be but you know...i called you the other day and i cant call you bc your dumbass mutha...so give me a call on my cell you knnow the # and my new home phone is 1-207-457-3914kk love you bunches

  • 14 years ago

    by staci

    BABE!!! i miss you so much...sry bout skewl it will get better soon...you know im goin to a new skewl soon but i have a fellin its gonna be the shit....but you need to keep ya head up high also...hope to seee you soon!!! i love you forever!!!
    StacemzZ...

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful, Wonderful, Bravo!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by erely

    This is so well written...Beautiful!!

  • 14 years ago

    by DarkOpex

    Hey Gabs, I've finally have time to return the favor of commenting on your poems. I greatly enjoyed reading this because it held truth. When one does out stretch their arms like that, its a very large chance. And you found a great way to put it all into words. Well Done : )

  • 13 years ago

    by Pieces of My Soul

    Wow! That was really great. I can relate to this poem...its how I feel about my girlfriend...so i guess we can both relate to each others poems! lol Great job...and keep write..cuz YOU got skill! :D

    Frank

  • 13 years ago

    by Christine

    Lovely

  • 7 years ago

    by rbmo401

    You r amazing sexy.