Hey i really like your poem. it explains alot on how u feel. thats really kool! keep writing and i hope ur doing okay!

Wow! this poem displays extreme care and bravery! Great poem! Very strong point and concise!!!!!Keep it up and thanks for your comment- i GREATLY appreciate it!
~ marianna

Its good

NOOO ERIC!!!!!!Death isn't coming near to you, I WON'T LET IT! I love you and I'll keep death away from you! -holds on to you- As long as I shall live I will not let anything or anyone hurt you or take you away!
I love you
Kala

Very good.... so deep and well its very good