Nothing in life is perfect if it was what would we have? but it's awlasy nice to dream of thing. amazing job loved it 5/5

I realy loved it. it was great. i love your poems. 5/5

Katie, i hate to burst your bubble but your dream can never happen, there is a song its about wanting what you have, you dont have a dream that you can control so turn what you have into your dream, i dont mean the negitives but the good happy things love Katie

I Liked It, It Was Diffrent Yet So Beautiful, I Admire The Way You Write 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hey! I can't tell you how much I can relate to this poem! I liked it allot! Really well written! 5/5 for sure . . . Keep writing!
*Lisa*

This was really good. I wish my dreams were this good but most of my dreams reflect my life... anyway I loved it lots... 5/5

~Suicidal Tears~

Its a great write as u can see from the comments!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!! sounds like my life!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5
~*SaRaH*~

This poem is WONDERFUL is so intence kayal likes it! lol keep up on your nice writting skills I love it