Aww thats so sweet...I'm guessing it's about your son or daughter. those are great wishes...and this is a cute poem.
thanks so much for your comment on mine!
Christina

This was good as well!! the flow was awesome, and it was better then your other, the rhyming every 2 lines seems to really work for you, keep it up! 5/5

Amazing poem nice flow you good keep up the amzing work 5.5

Great poem! in your poems you use great choice of words.