My poems are never brilliant, but I get a sense of satisfaction from the way I sometimes feel at least I have expressed the way I am feeling. I'd never consider myself a poet though, because I can't do what people like Sunny and yourself manage to do, writing balance, clever, technical poetry. well done.

It was great up to the last line. I thought the last line was just too damn cliche.

I don't really have a problem with the last line, i like the whole poem too if you feel that poetry is your destiny then why not write it. cory has a right to his opinion but i disagree with his comment. you did a great job with this poem and i really like the lines about the train of though jumping lines very creative. and welcome to our club!

~Jacklyn

Oh I love it!! It flowed effortlessly and truly showed your passion for poetry. It sounds like a writers block poem...lol Very nice write!!!

Great write! once in awhile we all go through this..some more than others (like someone I know for example) described me in many ways...keep up the good work!

Holly,
An awesome piece... as all of your work is. Just superb and flawless.

hugs, love, Ann

Another great one Ms. Holly. Its about time I read some and catch up. Miss you, Tim

Hey, that was a nice, interesting read! A lot said in a little!

Wow... I like the short words. How did you do that?

Pete