Thats really good..

That was good read my poems please and comment thaks bye

Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Great poems thats for the comment.
you should write poems for a living to.
5/5

Jay Jay

That was good keep it up maybe one day u might be a famours poet