This Raging Battle

by Ann Stareyes   Aug 23, 2005


There's a constant battle
It's found deep inside
My mind saying to let go
But my heart can't say goodbye.

What a impact you have on me
You now control my heart
A heart that once was beautiful
Now it's shattered and torn apart...

Your love was precious
Treasured beyond a doubt
If only I could've taught you
What true love was about...

But I'll fight this raging battle
And survive this dreadful storm
Once again I'll gain control
Of a lonely heart that mourns...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Danise

    Great write..good job. Keep up the good work and keep em coming..

  • 18 years ago

    by xx5OUL

    Niice :) keep it up !!!

  • 18 years ago

    by xx5OUL

    Niice :) keep it up !!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    WoW! Such emotion. I have never felt the pain you describe, of loving but not having it returned in the same way. Pain. Your writing style, words and pace convey the passion and emotion. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Peter DeJesse

    Your words are amazing and heartfelt. Very emotional. Keep smiling dear.

    Pete