Omfg this is realy good, i love it, 5/5 from me!!

Wow
sooo amazingly written and such a good message, i loved this poem
you did a wonderful job writing it
5/5

Wow...beautiful! very strong message. keep it up!
-xXx-

As much as i loved ur poem....i beg to differ ....im not trying to upset you or tell u that ur wrong......but theres always two perspectives....and i must say .....i agree with this one a lil more......

They say it is easy to escape life but hard to go on with it. What fools.... How many people can hold a gun to their head and pull the trigger? How many can cut a knife into their arms to pierce arteries and veins? How many can make the little step off a skyscraper? How many can swallow the cyanide pill? Small movements, a jerk of an index finger, a cut, a step, a swallow.

How many have the mental strength to deal with such a decision? How many can question their lives? How many can face the fact that all they have done is useless and that there is no use apart from procreation -and what kind of a goal is that? F**king, as the meaning of life. A goal for rabbits, for sheep, not for humans. And yet it is good enough for most. To wait, to wait for something to come, to save them, something that does not exist, something that does not come. And so they keep on giving birth while standing on their graves, waiting like sheep

again im not trying to offend you.....i reaslly did enjoy ur poem......but again.......theres two sides to everything

I'm suffering now and your poem really helped thank you so much read some of my poems please and maybe just maybe i'll help you

WOOOOOOW that was absolutly amazing! loved it i really did it brought a tear to my eyes great job !!!

That's one of the best poems I've read. The kindness of your character can be seen and it's really inspiring to move on. I've been there, far down, but I made it back up and escaped. Take Care.

-PG-

Great work i love how and who u dedicated it to i'm sure everyone well appreciate it too luv ya xox fallen

You are an amazing writer. I really really love this poem. Keep up the hard work.

~Nikki~

Hey ur good that helped alot!!!
keep it up!!

Hey gawjus...this was an awesome poem but sometime you cant stay stong and do reach for the knife and it helps us inside...sometimes we feel like we need to die and sometimes we feel we dont belong...but as you said...there always is someone there for you...i just havnt found my person yet...but i really loved your poem! 100/10 awesome stuff

Thank yo so much for such a beautiful poem. You may know non of us, and you especially don't know me. But keep writing, it brought inspiration to me. Don't give up on trying to help.

love much
silvershade
a.k.a. tanya
4 ever & 4 always

This poem is so strong, it really meant alot to me, you are a terrific writer, keep it up~ much love

Hey this is an awesome poem i love the way you express yourelf and tell ppl to hang on because its true there is some one out for every one im in love with the person im dating right now so for all you downers just remember it takes a strong person to live. id appreciate it if you would comment on one of my poems thanks.5/5

Excellent...words arent enuf to tell u how good this poem is! well done !
take care and keep fighting
xxxLoUxxx

*even the people who never frown eventually breakdown* - L.P

i fu(ken love this poem !! u have talent!!!

I really loved this poem..its somthin I really needed to hear..well thank you..this poem was really great..I wish I was as talented as you....

xoxo ::Empty Inside::

Hey,
I just wanted to say... thanks for the hope. I just broke up with my boyfriend... literally a few minutes ago and Im not feeling too hot. Im going to call someone though, it will be okay.
*Sara

Wow. I wish I had read that last year, you tell a truth in that poem that I needed to be enlightened to a long time ago, instead of months of suffering. Good job, its an amazing poem, I can already think of someone I'm going to make read it.
-Paula