Untitled (part ii)

by JaCkIe   Aug 23, 2005


Trying to let go of my fears
before i lose you so
lil by lil, day after day
wanting to be all you need in each and every way.

Feeling so happy when I'm with you
doubting how all this can be true
hoping for things to go right
cuz i just cant get you out of my sight.

Scared to death of losing you
whenever you may just want to go
wanting you in every way
making you all i need each and every day.

(Inspired by someone who i truly love and just not meant to be with!)

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  • 18 years ago

    by taeyanna

    Hay.... that was written really nicly.....i just recently started putting in my poems i have tons of them it jsut takes for ever to get them all out huh! well anyways i think u did a really good job writen that..much love ..keep up the good work you're a great write...

    XoTaeyannaXo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Ah yes the far away love - we have all been there once or twice!!! nice write bud

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel Foster

    Wow amazing poem!!! loved it xx