Comments : What if it were you?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    Amazing poem it has a deep message and i like it alot great work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Enya

    Wow.... this is, amazing...

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I understand this poem, because when a person truely reaches out for help.. and has this.. faint glint of hope in their eyes.. then someone shoots them down. Then that person may give up, or think because no one cares there is nothing to live for. Because a portion of the world is cruel and uncaring, they may think the rest of the world is too.

  • 18 years ago

    by zay

    Yo i was a cutter at one time but i dont do that shit any more but i love ur poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Debra

    Im right there w/ u on this 1, word 4 word. thanks 4 saying what a lot of us have been 2 scared 2 say 4 a long time. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Terri

    Hey, i lik ur poem it is truly great i am a cutter n im tryin 2 stop 4 my best friend that isnt lik ur poem evry1 else thought is was nothin but my best friend was always there i just wish evry1 else had a best friend lik me

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki McKay

    Hey you stole my name :p
    just wanted to say that you write very good poems.....keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Ixora

    Wow can i relate...i love it hun keep it ujp...thanx for the comment n for the offer but im a independent prsn im sure u understand if it ever gets too much tho i know who to turn to n that means a lot to me thanx...keep it up hun i love ur writing...

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