Wowz

Wh0a dude. that's great :-D

WADDUPP THUG!

EMOO BOYY!

"No cure for unrequited love

No miracle sent from up above"

I know. It's sad but true.

Nicely done...the repetition, the flow, the honest emotions.

"except forgetting you
and finding me "

Moving on is important and can be very hard to do...finding yourself can be even harder. Eventually you get through it all...

xxx

Sweet, talk to me @ datallasian@yahoo.com
that gurl seemed to hav lost somethin good!

Good job!!!! its soo true! thnx for comment on my poem.. "my letter" i'd really like it if i knew ur opinions about my other ones too...most of them are better...but really good job on this poem!!