O__O this is a....different...poem. I like how you write it, because it's in a totally different view from the other rape poems. I just hope this isn't you....O.o I REALLY hope this isn't you lol. It's a terrible story, but a wonderfully written and thought out poem. And It's VERY intriguing. I had to keep reading, because I had no idea what was going to happen next, unlike all the other rape poems. Great write!

Take Care,
Renee

Wow that a good poem kind of messed up but still a good in a way I give you a 5/5 cause it has such a good ryhme to it lataz

...Its amazing tha igf this was real i would be sad.. the girl that u rape must have been scared.. If it was imaginary then .. good job.. but other wise.. Its sad..

Umm i hope this isnt true i would be scared O_o lol great poem though
5-5

Wow great job keep it up
5/5

Omg this is different..flowed well..is it true??
take care x x x

Wow scary.... but so real!!! great poem

WOW!!! I have to say that I really liked this poem. Mostly because you always read poems of people being raped, but this one came from the actualy raper. I've always wondered what goes through someones mind while they are doing that stuff and this poem answered part of it! It was different and creative and I liked it!!
~Chelsey

Hey, really good.... hope it's not true though...
xxx Cici xxx

Thats a good poem but kinda cold but 5/5 can you comment on any of my 3 poems thnx bye

Wonderful poem (regarding it isnt true).... I had been looking for a poem from this P.O.V. for a long time and when I couldnt find one I was going to write one myself but this is way better than what I came up with. Nice work.. its scary that some people could actually think like that.

Wonderful poem (regarding it isnt true).... I had been looking for a poem from this P.O.V. for a long time and when I couldnt find one I was going to write one myself but this is way better than what I came up with. Nice work.. its scary that some people could actually think like that.

Good poem...really captivates the reader. I liked how you straddled the line between graphic and nondescript. Very genuine.

--christa//no motiv?

Please tell me that isnt real

Wow, I really like it. It's quite different and different is what we all want. Keep it up old boy.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Frightening...awesome job on this...keep it up...you're a great writer, Garrett. Take care.

Love always,
Mortie.xxxx

Oh my god i could never write something like that have you or would you do something like that

My god, that was really frightening, it began all nicely then turned pretty darn evil, I hope that isnt you, if it is *run away*, anyway, I thought the poem flowed really well, each line carried the fear and suspense really well, it left me feeling quite scared, remind me never to meet someone for coffee again.. It really flowed well and none of it was forced..

The ending was brilliant, it rounded the poem off perfectly, well done to you, and I hope this isnt you..

take care
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My gosh that was well written...holy cow, i felt the emotion all the way through and it was POWERFUL! i can't give you anything less then 5/5, wow. really impressed over here

That was freaky, but excellent.

-Taylor