Now thats a dif. perspective , check mine out, ive got one with the same title ooooh yea .... Excellent job!5/5

Its dark therefore i love it, well done, it has a nice idea to it.. you really are talented

I like this poem as well, more dark than sad, Short but deep. nice work.

Very creative very sad. I really enjoyed reading this poem even though i was a little confused on it but it's all good though. You did a wonderful job on this. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Oohh, Chilly. ;)

Very good short and dark 5/5

Your rhyming could use alittle work...air and cares....out and shouts....wiind end....so i gave the poem a 4.....though i loved this poem it was excellent there were a few minor mistakes

This poem was short and straight to the point!

"Now frost covers the ground,
A silent chill rises in the air,
Things are lost that can't be found,
That sheild tears of silent cares."

liked this part!
keep it up!

Ok.. umm why is this poem on here 3 times?..

no offense but isnt that kind of.. idk.bad? .. its a wicked good poem., so any moe who reads anoy of them will vote it high.. so your rating goes up..and they could read 3 diff poems(same poems) and will raise it.. so its kind of not fair.. n/o