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I like the style and idea, better if it was longer though:) |
by Bredada
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Short and cute opem i should dedicated to my xboyfriend |
by ~Black*Rose~
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I will give it a 4/5, it was great, But i don't really like poems that habve lines that repet themselfes, The reason i did give a high rating is because you poem was sincer. |
by Emma
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Great poem keep up the good work. |
by Matthew
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Hi Nicole, well it was ok. It was short and to the point and it seemed to have strong feeling behind it. The repeating line was ok, but the poem did seem a little choppy at certain points, thats not bad but its something you can notice and improve on 5/5. |
by Drew Gold
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I like this,.. there is a lot of feeling behind it of course, but you dont show it.. by the way .,. thought is spelled with a t.. imma look for more of urs.. ill give this one 4/5 |
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This was awesome! i know how you feel! omg that was awesome, i mean it didnt rhyme but it was great!! i loved it 5/5 for sure! |
by None
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This was too simple and not very fun to read...nothing was major,no descriptive words...sounds more like a one sided conversation than anything. |
by wendy
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I like this poem it is simple and down to the point this is.. 1 |
by M MEM
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This is pretty good, too many I's though. still pretty good |
by Lenny
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Thats cute, i love how its so short and so to the point which makes it awesome |
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Truly sensational. |
by crystal
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I really like it. it was a little short but it was still good. great job |
by SweetSuicide
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I like the stlye of the poem..and it flowed really well..great poem..5/5 |
by Andrea
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Eh i didnt have to much interest in this poem. it was ok but it could have been better. |
by morgan
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I luv this so much |
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Again.. i didn't really get it, it was really short and got to the point, but it was pretty much just repeating the same thing. |
by HansRik
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Very good, though short, very eomtive and powerful. I like it a lot. The words are accurate (though a small grammatical error in the third line, you forgot to capitalise the "i") The flow could be a bit better, but this is simply wonderful. Keep it up! |
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Very good ,short and got to the point |
by Goth
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Thats Serious! again a few lines a little long but over all, very well writtin. |