Comments : Did you Ever?

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    I like the style and idea, better if it was longer though:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    Short and cute opem i should dedicated to my xboyfriend

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    I will give it a 4/5, it was great, But i don't really like poems that habve lines that repet themselfes, The reason i did give a high rating is because you poem was sincer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Great poem keep up the good work.
    Emma
    Sorry it took me to get back to you

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew

    Hi Nicole, well it was ok. It was short and to the point and it seemed to have strong feeling behind it. The repeating line was ok, but the poem did seem a little choppy at certain points, thats not bad but its something you can notice and improve on 5/5.
    Good luck

    And if you would, please read my newest poem, What's in a Name, you will like it i promise.

  • 18 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    I like this,.. there is a lot of feeling behind it of course, but you dont show it.. by the way .,. thought is spelled with a t.. imma look for more of urs.. ill give this one 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    This was awesome! i know how you feel! omg that was awesome, i mean it didnt rhyme but it was great!! i loved it 5/5 for sure!

  • 18 years ago

    by None

    This was too simple and not very fun to read...nothing was major,no descriptive words...sounds more like a one sided conversation than anything.

  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    I like this poem it is simple and down to the point this is.. 1

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    This is pretty good, too many I's though. still pretty good

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats cute, i love how its so short and so to the point which makes it awesome

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Truly sensational.

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    I really like it. it was a little short but it was still good. great job
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    I like the stlye of the poem..and it flowed really well..great poem..5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Eh i didnt have to much interest in this poem. it was ok but it could have been better.

  • 18 years ago

    by morgan

    I luv this so much

  • 18 years ago

    by sadnessinshadows

    Again.. i didn't really get it, it was really short and got to the point, but it was pretty much just repeating the same thing.

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    Very good, though short, very eomtive and powerful. I like it a lot. The words are accurate (though a small grammatical error in the third line, you forgot to capitalise the "i") The flow could be a bit better, but this is simply wonderful. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good ,short and got to the point

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Thats Serious! again a few lines a little long but over all, very well writtin.