GREAT JOB !!!!

i love that!!

its so good !!

i have poems about my dad
I FEEL UE PAIN !!
5?%

5/5 ***

THANK YOU

Family realtionships/breakups are a very senstive poems and can be very depressing. howver i feel that even tho this poem is sad you have put abit of humour init towards the end mayb to say that even tho he has left u are still goin to carry on. i think that was a really good technique and you really do deserve this poem toi be awarded. u really are a good poet :)

I love how you stood up for not only yourself but for your mom as well. i like the way you write