This is wonderfully done:) Keep it up I love the first Stanza=)

Jenn x0x0x

Wow. beautifull!

Hey very good poem. I'm just getting into poetry and i have a poem up on my profile called "Once I'm Gone I'm Gone" so far i only have one vote of a 5 but im entering it into a state contest through my highschool english teacher. It's an easy read so please rate it fairly and comment on it thanks. I liked this poem though i will have to try and use that format.

I love the way u write the poem it was unique. u just gave me inspiration to write a poem in this form. keep up the good work

Nice poem Mr.Beesley..keep it up..hope to read more.
Just keep on searchin for ur poem everyday..
especially this one was kool

Neo

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work, you're doing. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace