I Promise

by Justin   Aug 27, 2005


If you let me love you
I promise to be true
Believe me when I tell you
There's nothing I'd rather do

I'll keep you warm
When it's cold at night
Watch over you
While I hold you tight

Kiss your face
While you sleep
Because you'd be mine
Forever to keep

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    I think its a really good poem i like it alot! If a guy felt that way about me I would be real lucky to have him... but anyways keep up the good work ur a great writer
    ~Britt~

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Usually when thats said to a girl, she thinks it cute. But when she thinks about it-she remembers who hurt her by saying those same words. You might want to look at a different structure to base your wording on. But none the less its a 3 out of 5. Sorry, if I'm harsh.. :(

    -Jennifer.

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