Comments : Your Wedding Night

  • 14 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful write, very romantic....... loved it.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Wow...I guess I don't really remember reading your poetry...or maybe your style has just changed...I'm adding you to my favorites so I can be on the look out for more...this was beautiful Amanda...I absolutely loved. You have some damn talent!!! :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Kat

    That was terrific Amanda i hope u keep writing and read some of mine if u want to

  • 14 years ago

    by M J U

    WTG excellent and critically truthfull of the beginning. Great work Amanda. (Matt)

  • 14 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    Wow! ok i know this must be a personal poem but...i'm very nosy. is this your wedding night?

  • 14 years ago

    by SoupErHereOh

    Omg that is so good

  • 14 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... that was amazing!!! so sensual and full of passion. absolutely amazing! keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Anthony

    This is such a mixture of Comic and Love poetry!
    As you meet him in the bedroom
    Remember to reticently bat your eyes
    Then throw him a seductive smile
    Watch as he’s taken by surprise
    great write!


  • 14 years ago

    by Atomic

    I think I saw this poem in Sunny's weekly poetry contest.

    I'm sure you'll beat my pathetci poem with this lovely love poem.

    Well done M'Dear.

    No complaints here.

    I geart your description of every girls' general idea of a perfect wedding.

    ( )_( )
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    How did I miss this one....this is one of the most beautiful pieces that I have read.....You are blessed with talent....absolutely breathtaking....Loved it....

    Love Ann

  • 14 years ago

    by Rajkamal

    Nicely written.

  • I Loved It....You Brought a Whole New Outlook On Wedding Bliss Altogether...Most Love Poems Describe The Wedding...But Never What Happens After It All...And You've Done Such a Great Job Of Displaying The Happiness And Excitement That Comes After The "I Do's"

    All you’ll hear is the sound of passion
    As your bodies interlace
    As you both make your way to ecstasy
    Pause to look upon his face

    For you’ll be sure to see the love there
    And his faithful pledge will be in sight
    For your future holds so much promise
    Beginning with your wedding night
    ^^ Simply Beautiful

    5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo