Whoa it's so true, i feel identified with it
i added u to my favorites cuz i love u're stuff
i would love it if u could tell me what u think about my stuff

adios, take care

p i l i

Sourly true. 5

This is sooo beautiful...wow where do u get your ideas form. 5/5...thank you for your comments i appreciate it

Wow... this is really good... It fit together well... and it is so realisic... I loved it lots...

~Suicidal Tears~

OMG!! That is so nice and so true. It rele fits well. U know ppl are always trying to show that they're ok while from inside they're bleedin - actually i was one of em. ne ways nice poem espicially the how the story ends.

Holy shit omg that was seoriously really really good i feel for ya girl!! Luv yaz -liz

This is exactly how I use to appear to the world... Great write...

Sigh...that is a great poem but unfortunately it is about me. well...not entirely. i feel all those dark feelings and i am all those things but not so much that i want to kill myself. great poem, i give it a 5.

B E A U T I F U L...............you have a talent that i have never seen before. This poem is full of feeling and emotion. Keep it up, luv jess xoxoxo

This was honestly amazing! i somtimes feel i can relate to it 101%!
true talent girl!
5/5

jen!eo

So true, just because u think u know someone doesnt mean u do.