Comments : My bedroom is my home

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I can totally relate to this poem...I spend the majority of my free time in my room by myself, thinking, dreaming, reading, writing, whatever...I love it! great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I love it and relate so much...I use to stay in my room for days, cause I knew that I would be safe....No one could hurt me...I was all alone but safe, just like you!!!

    Love you girl..

  • Well it is random...but its very good to me. lolz...you are really talented and thats all i have to say...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    I love it and its sooo true, but can you rhyme space with space??? lol thats ok i still give you a 5/5

    *~BloodScars~*

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    This is really well written, its looking at the positive aspect of your room. very good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    That was brilliant, I love my room to, the only time I emerge from it is to eat, it really does make you feel safe, its your own personal space, you put across your love for your room very well, this was a really good, interesting poem, the most original I have read today, made me smile, I hope you have much more happiness in your room :)

    I loved this stanza the most
    "No one to hurt me,
    The privacy feels great,
    No sense of hassle,
    No one to hate"

    Wonderful, well done to you

    take care
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    Nicely written! your actually really right about all of this, it was very well written, the flow was perfect too!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by amanda

    I loved your poem. The way that you wrote it its how i feel. i mean it is my own personal space.

    Awesome poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda,
    Even myself at age 46 still loves the privacy of my bedroom. It's my little getaway too. Great job.

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey sweety....I have tried to send you an email, but my addy is so fu**ed up....So I have made a new one...Please send me a mail on my profile, like a private message and I'll send you the mail I wrote....

    Much love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by sinister

    Well done. i cant relate. i use to spend alot of time there myself. its still the safest place i can think of and there i am king.

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Reminds me of dope smoking teenage years lol Great write :o)