Comments : Daddy... (true story on 9/11)

  • 18 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    Oh wow im crying now. Im sorry, would you name happen to be tom? or just a name you picked up? loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Wow.. this is good... it's really sad... im sry about your friend...

  • 18 years ago

    by quick&painless

    Tom would be a friend of mine...

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Wow...I started crying like right away. Its so hard to read stuff like this sometimes. I didn't think it was bad at all.
    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • I'm crying... this is really good... soooooooo sad but you've written it down really well.
    I'm sorry about your friend, the whole thing should never have happened.
    xxx Charli xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    OMG so sad and sorry to hear about your friend

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Oh my gosh that is so sad i love it it is so great

  • 18 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    I love poems bout 9/11,there so full of emotions, and that was really well done,im sorry bout ya friend and her dad

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Omg.....im speechless......its amazing! im so sorry this is true!! great job! 5/5 keep up the good work and take care! XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Mat

    Awww that's sad... is it a true story about you and your father or just a child and their father? either way very well written, well constructed, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    Wow when i read that i cried. thats sad and im sorry about ur friend.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsi

    No..its not good...its GREAT!! You have talent!! I hope your friends mom is alright?!! I wish more people would care more...about people like that..and watch them more..becuz it has to be really hard!! I hope you are doing alright!! Great job!! Keep writing!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lemma

    I love this poem, it's so sad it made me cry. I'm really sorry about your friend. Keep writing.

    Em x

  • 18 years ago

    by The Crappy Poet

    How sad....

  • 18 years ago

    by beth

    Wow I give this poem 5/5 because it impacted me sooo much I was in tears! but a good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by *black*and*white*

    That's so sad, i hope you keep writing cuz you're really good at it

  • I lost my best friend to suicide to it hurts to read things like that but we all sort of feel like doing that at some point and that poem was a great poem it shows you really cared and im sure f your friend was alive today she would be very proud.

  • 18 years ago

    by MariiaShan

    I know it probably doesn't mean much coming out of my mouth but You are extremely well gifted and I am very pleased to see that someone has finally written about the tragedy that struck the world in 2001.I too Lost someone in that flight...My Brother and well we may not have been the best of friends we were still really close.
    I would gladly help you out anytime you needed somebody to talk to I too lost someone very close to me (other than My brother)My best friend killed herself (read about it in " goodbye note"well anywase here if you need me

    devin

    lil_miss_gang_fighter@msn.com

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I'm sorry about your friend. This poem made me cry. All of my love to you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kittie

    Hey I hope that everything is ok with you, are you ok after your friend passed, well Iloved the poem, 5/5
    BloodRedRose