Comments : They took my happiness

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Nice job hun. but who are they? xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I love the ending the most. But it was all an amazing write. Plus I can relate somewhat to the whole poem. Defianlty deserves 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    Great job girl. great emotion and i know how this feels. i hope ur ok. love ya

    ~babygirl88~

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good...itz got a lot of emotionz in it..*hugz* hope ur alrite...take care and keep ur head up..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    This is really sad..But really good. I'm sorry "they" took away the only one that cared for you! I hope ur doing better!! Take care!

    Muah

  • 18 years ago

    by lifelessdays11

    I CAN RELATE TOTALLY!!...THAT SAME THING HAPPENED 2 ME!!,,,IT SUX SO BAD!!...GREAT JOB