Love it.. =)

Wow this was good i liked it....a few rough areas but hey...i cant judge since it might go with the way you sing it....lol...so yea thanks for the comments on my poems...luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Thats really good, i'm a slight songwriter myself and from my point of veiw its quit well wrote xox fallen

Great job. I've written a few songs myself and this one flows very nicely. There is a steady rhythm to it, making it easy to perform. It's a little short, but it's fine.
-Kate

(the only song that I have online is "Forget")

Very touching, i can understand songs more so then anything else.. wish i could actually hear how its suspose to go, anyway good job, 5/5