Well, I am impressed...

Every line fits perfectly in..every word contributes to making it a remarkable peace of poetry...

The last two lines contrast the rest of the poem in a perfect way, and makes it ever more exiting to read..

So original...

Seldom have I read a more beautiful sonnet...and I read quite alot..I'm a big fan of this style...

well...

congrats on one hell of a poem

Very nice, splendid visions brought to life, in such resplendence!!!

Once again a wonderful poem!

This is awesome, Steve. if it is your dream, it must be real!

regards
shobhana

Well this poem lacks something i am not sure what i have read some of your other works and you have some talent but for some reason this poem offers me nothing