I woke up with an empty bed
whoa, deja'vu! i used that in my book once! (in different context, but same idea) but i deleted it cause i thought it was to early in the book.
wow, this whole thing keeps reminding me of my book.
oh, that last line makes it change the veiw of the whole thing, and makes it even sweeter. the way you explain your craving really pours out emotion, this is really good, 5/5