Amasing! that was great. you have a real talent.

WoW........ amazing. that was.......GREAT.. thanks for the comment on my poem and keep up the good work 5/5

Well written! Keep it up! Check out mine too!

Very sad that youll never forgive but i know how hard it can be to forgive someone but this was an exellent poem Love, ALLY xx

"You have destroyed your only daughter,
Now all she can do is pray,
Hoping there's a god,
That will help her through each day"

again, beautiful and full of emotion. sad, but still wonderful. this stanza hit me hard, i loved the way it was written withthe "hoping there's a god" part.

amazing!