Comments : My poem on child abuse (Must say my emotions!)

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Wow rainy..i reallly felt ur anger there, good one, i feel the same way about those ***holes...btw, not all my poems r fantasy...they might just be true.;)) lol, and about ur friend cris, whats his ID? cuz i probably wont kno who he is if he ever contacts me....iono lol, well ttyl xxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Bravo to that!

    "For each life you did kill..."

    I just think it could be good to add something about the killing inside as well as out...because many are dying internally but not yet physically. I'm sorry if/that you have to go through horrible treatment from any abusers. But I love the poem! Strong voice, releashed anger, and those abusers certainly deserve it.

    xxx