Comments : A long time

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Powerful poem again. Congrats you can write sad poetry that doesn't make me want to fall asleep, that's rare.
    Just one thing, the second line doesn't make sense, I think there's a word missing.
    Good poem, thanks for sharing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Heyhey! great poem!! sad yet really powerful! it was very well done! keep up da awesome work! =D
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is my favorite so far. I felt like that last year. It sucks. anyway stay strong and keep writing. Your a really talented writer