I like this poem, took a few reads to get my head round it but once i had managed that i liked it

This is an interesting read, you use good vocab!!
I really enjoyed reading it,m and its great without a flow which is hard to do!
Well done, I enjoyed this xx

Wow.. this too is an intersting poem!.. you've used great wrods to describe your feelings and emotions! strong and power words indeed.. i am impressed keep up the great work =)

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