A very touching and beautiful poem

How about this why don't you just read my poetry and don't judge my poetry because you are no better than i am

I don't know facts or anything, but commenting on poems should be used for what it is and not for argument. Whatever the reason it shouldn't be expressed here. Comments are to be structured if criticism is required...

Anyway, a great poem. A hell of a lot of passion here!

Love the artitisc fabric and picture that you have created in the piece and the atmosphere that is accompanied.

Good write and does not deserve the under rated votes that you have been given. Keep up the work.

Regards,

Steve