Comments : Depression

  • 18 years ago

    by Garrett

    Hey great poem, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow.. really good poem... i really loved the flow u have there..
    ur rele good..
    hope everythings okay hunn
    if u need a person to talk to u can always talk to me..
    if u have the time.. could u check out my poems and tell me maybe how i could improve??
    thanx
    once again great poem u have
    5/5 =)
    stay strong

  • 18 years ago

    by Robiie

    Wow
    your really talented
    great job
    take care x0x0

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Oi u, dint notice this poem! Sorry. Don't think you are alone - ever- ok? You got me and i got u right??? I'm scared cos my life has been turned upside down and i can't cope! Be strong for me please hun :)

  • 18 years ago

    by keep n touch

    End of 2nd stanza, why would you wanna be the person who makes themselves bleed?? that's how you wrote it, or maybe i just have a bad sense of interpretation. well this poem shows heartfelt emotion, and depression. things will get better

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    There's so much emotion in it, and i can totally relate to it, but as time pass by, you will see that you live a great life after all. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mark Coates

    Wow thats all i can describe it with that poem is just so true 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Thank you for liking my poem.. i also liked your poem very much..

  • 18 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    Cool poem...the rhyming isnt in order but it makes it sounds better..haha...funky..keep it up:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Very solidly conveyed. Well done indeed.

  • 18 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Great job... you are definitely a good poet.. i hope that you arent this lost in depression... thats not something anyone should have to go through... let me know if you need someone... to talk to or whatever... im a good listener..
    take care
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    I felt the same way before.
    This poem is great, like always. You got your emotions out very well and kept the flow of the poem while doing it well done!

    Stay strong!! Please?

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very sad. im sorry that u hold that dark depression inside. the poem was great though, I liked how it was almost sarcastic for a minute there.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    Awsome poem! I love the form and flow of it! Keep it up! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    I like your poems, but everything seems to be based on depression and cutting.

    You're an excellent writer, maybe you can pick another topic?

    My favourite stanza were:

    "I can write you a letter and make you read
    about the times I made myself bleed
    would that make you see the real me
    or show you the person I want to be"

    Especially the last two lines.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by mihara

    Its great...!! sometimes i do feel like doing the things mentioned in your poem..!! but you see...im scared of pain...anyways! great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awesome poem and sry about the chick who stole ur other poem thats messed up lol i think some ppl just do that cuz they cant wright there own poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Esmeralda

    WOW IT'S IT JUST HOW I AM FEELING! LIKE IF I'M THINKING THIS AND YOU ARE WRITING IT WOW! I HOPE I CAN GET TO WRITE LIKE YOU! PLEASE IF YOU CAN CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS AND GIVE ME ADVICE I KNOW I NEED IT!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    One of my x-boyfriends told me a story just like your you just have to find your purpose in life and live with it.....

  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really liked this one. It flowed very well and the rhyme scheme was simple yet effective. I love the way its almost a plea to someone who couldnt understand- its very real.