Pretty sketchy, emtion was great, wordplay was good, but it felt like it was missing something. It was still a good poem though.

This is a cool poem...great job i love the way that u wrote this...i gave you a 5/5 because you deserve it big time...you are very talented...

Interesting peice. sometimes hard to follow, but it gives an emotion, which is the important thing. nicely done, but could use a little work. 4/5

Its a stunning poem .... got my attention.. really did...i like your other poem too...good work always gets 5/5 thanks a ton for ur comment on my poems... very appreciated.. !
love
amy

Wow i realy enjoyed reading this poem!! I love the words you use the flow was good! keep up the good write!

~wishesdocometrue~