Fighter this is another amazing poem I love it. I cant express how good it is. Very well written, is the metaphor death and trying to reach out from the spirit world? or do I have it horribly wrong *blushs*

Thankyou for all the comments its means alot to me, epsecially on todays poems... its been a bad day, well hope to read more soon

Keep it up and coming, stay strong
Love always
Jenn x0x0x

Ps. -sorry forgot to ask before- could you read a kiss of tomorrow and tell me what you think... I dont think its quite right and I would really love your input

Thanks
Jenn

Thank you soo much!!! :D it means so much to me.

Pure Silence: you got the metaphor :D yay!!! lol im happy you understood it

W00t*dance* I get it for once!

Very nice! It's a metaphor for death. And the person is watching as her loved ones cry over her body. Nice job, Fighter...as always:)

Brilliant metaphor hun. i love the way you always use them its what gives you your own unique and brilliant style

The structure and flow was immaculate, such a brilliantly written poem.

Warmest regards,

Steve

WOW -------> that was SO D33p ....Ya got mad lyrics ...chec ..out my 1 poem that i have up right now