Beautiful I love it keep it up 5/5

Jenn x0x0x

Lol looks like we will never be free from those metaphors! but seriously i love it 5/5 xox

I was so entranced, I had to read it twice. I love the title it fits perfectly...amazing job, keep up the good work!

Wow, another great.. your poems inspire me!!
Keep writing or im stuffed :D
:)Smile:)

Your poems make me jealous.

I liked the flow and the third verse was different from the rest - nice twist.

Keep it up.

-Kenneth G. @ Faceless Mirror.

This poem was simply amazing, such sadness expressed in such a nice fowing poem! Good job.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid