Hey thanks i'm gld to hear that!!!!
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That was good send it to him 5/5

Though u hv already got the suggestions and may b by now u wud hv given it to him too...still wnated to say that i really could feel the pain..so go ahead and even while parting...appreciation like this could bring a smile

all the best and take care

I think you should send it to him. Before you do (if you haven't all ready gave it to him) I would read over it becasue it sounds like you left out key words like: is and the...you know those type words. But I really could feel your love and sorrow in it. I gave it a 5. Thanks for the comments you left it ment a lot.

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Congratulations,you have done a good job so please don't stop writing poems because you're very talented.
Take good care of you
5/5 for sure
*hugs*

Hell Yea u should send it to him,this is good and even through u guys aint 2gether he need to kno how u feel.......he'll think about it and no matter wat he'll always remember!!!! well if u can ckeck mine out and comment for me!!!!