One look

by Michelle   Sep 1, 2005


One look and you'd probably agree.. people make judgments by what they see.. They see a girl her face so clear.. but they cannot see one thing and that is fear.
They do not know what's behind her eyes, but every single night she Cries. They see a girl who undergoes no stress.. but do not know her minds a mess..
They see a girl who walks with pride.. but they don't know she just wants to hide.
They see a girl who's out going and fun.. but she knows she still hasn't won..
She hopes and dreams she could be thinner.. makes it happen by not eating dinner..
They see a girl who's funny and witty.. but she can't help but think of her own pitty..
They see a girl who's open and free.. but they cannot seriously see..
Her heart aches for the while true love takes.. closed behind large doors, she quietly mourns.. she's filled with sorrow.. but is hopeful of tomorrow..
They see a girl with no disgrace.. but all they really see is her face..
One look and you'd probably agree.. people make judgments of what they see..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lemma

    Great poem, I love the way you ended it. I can relate to it aswell coz I have a friend like that. Hope this isn't about you but if it is then feel better soon :) Keep up the good work,

    Em x

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    Omg this is like one of the best poems ever...good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    Hey this is a good poem. i think u should see how it looks when its not in paragraph form. otherwise the poem is great i know what u mean. i hate it when people judge others by just the way they see them, especially my parents thats y i like makin friend with people who dont really look "proper" but its only cos theyr really great people when u get to know them. anyway good poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    Hey chica, that was a really good poem i gave it a 5, and its soooo true, i gatta friend just like that and if u dont mind i want to read it to her.
    thanx
    ~*Kayla*~
    aka
    ~*Baby-Face*~