I really like how you can make your poems so visual. Love the imagery and your choice of words. From all your poems I like this one most. Take Care.

-PG-

Woah, creepy. but tha's what I liked about it. and I liked that part about the crimson liquid trickling down. 5/5

Amazingly Crafted poem,awsome discreptions,i love how you streched the stabbing part into so much great line.

peace \m/

Really, Really awesome poem! Loved the way you explored a new way of saying things in the poem really cool! ^_^

Woaho, very dark i like it a lot! thanx for the comment, i appreciated it. your poems are also very very good. this one rhymes nicely.

I loved this... i read your stuff all the time, and this one was one of the best... great rhyming, that's usually how i rhyme too... write more, your stuff is great... dark and disturbing, just my taste