Comments : Miss Misery.

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    Omg i really liked that! its very discriptive and kinda channels all your feelings into one. i especially liked this bit

    All my strength has weakened into nothing but endless crying. After everything that's happened, I'm too sick and tired of trying.

    well done keep it up ill be reading :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    I really liked it alot .expecially the part
    Misery let me go and this chain you seem to not release .It is a bold statement that really stands out .

  • 16 years ago

    by Melanie

    This poem is really good its very original i can totally relate but i have to say you do have better ones i love your poems your in my favorate good job and keep writting

  • 16 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I love it... miss misery...how sad, but very well done.

    "People surround me and I'm still the dust upon that wooden shelf."

    Great metaphors/description. Keep writing, dear.

    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    That was an amazing poem i can relate to every feeling that u have spoken about...I love the format of this poem, and both rhythem and rhyme were fantastic! keep up the good work