This was cool! Very muck like some of Auden's work, "you are my north, my south, my east and west, my working week and sunday rest". WOW! that was really cool! Keep it up! I know what you mean about someone being EVERYTHING!

Oh haha i thought this was gonna be written by your boyfriend or something. definitely suprised me lol.
anywho it was so sweet, i loved it

I agree with everybody, unexpected! Well done, I am sure your friend is proud of you. I have a similar poem: "I love you", perhaps you could read and comment if you wish.

Very cute, ^_^

A beautiful piece indeed, I like it.

That was so sad, but in a sweet way! luved it 5/5

Oh my god this is soooo sweet...5/5

This poem reminds me of me and my best friend.
Once again.
I love the way you find words to rhym in your poems.
That's really what makes you a great poet.
5/5

This a very sweet and beautiful poem and its nice to hear the dedication. your friends lucky to have a friend like you!
xxx :)

This is so beautiful! Very good job!