Mind Freeze

by Ashton   Sep 2, 2005


My mind is freezing up, and i dont know what to say
everything is upside down, and the sky is turning gray
somethings in my mind, twisting up my brain
and when i look around i feel like i am insain
my logics all gone, it ran away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Really good I like it
    Love Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by JLT

    Wow.. It's a beautiful poem, sweetheart. And you did misspell insane : / But other than that, it's wonderful! Very emotional, and i love it. Keep up the good work, babe. *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Ok, u have misspelt insane, but its still a great poem!! good work

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Awww..:'(

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