Comments : Bitter Winds of Eternity...

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    That anything and everything in life comes to an end.
    Sometimes coming with tragedy and trauma
    At others a breath of relief
    Logically conclusions cannot be avoided

    I loved those lines, especially the first one because it really does speak the truth! This poem is one of my favorite new ones from you Eirisa, but those lines touched me the most! Great Write Eirisa! MUAH!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by keep n touch

    This poem is tough, but i'm glad i read it. is realization spelled right? idk maybe i'm wrong.. i love spell check. forever is a long time, and like you, it's hard for me to accept so much time

  • The Title Captured Me, Made Me Want To See This Brilliant Poem, And I Was Not Dissapointed, No Wonder Your On My Favorites :) 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    I like giving ppl advice. But i do hit poems where it really doesn't need advice and i learn from it. Great job and such a wide variety of vocabulary words. Bravo!

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    EiRisa.. iTs d0ra this is my nEw acc0unt c0z my 0ther 0ne g0t sUspendEd. t0uching p0em. ill b adding new p0ems s0on!

    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    *x00o00x*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Love the title and there for i loved that last line as well. this poem just captured me i read it so fast! wonderful job!

    ~Jacklyn