Comments : These Tears

  • 17 years ago

    by smile

    This is not a poem in the true sense and i feel it lacks in structure some what, (basic flow and rythmatic beats)
    Yet because of the nature of this poem (dis-functional parents) it seems to suit it
    very well planned on that side.
    was it intentional?
    or were you just so wound up at that moment the words just wrote there own poem?
    anyways you must be a true genius.

    great poem never the less

    **smile**