As far as love for me, I have love, but I don’t know who I should give it you?

I think that should be to at the end.

This was good short and powerful, its not a rhyming poem but has great meaning.
I loved the end it broiught it all together well done again x)

Not bad, the format is similer to that of "My Faith", so I don't down-point for that, but the subject was unclear and the lines didn't blend well. nice try, 3/5

-sigh- I'd enjoy an emo mix tape right about now