I love your poems!! And this one is really good!

*~Jamie~*

Good luck. Be yourself. ;)

Sweet poem. You've hit 100 poems now!

xxx

Wow, sweet poem unrequited! I love the short stanzas, it flows nicely.:)

Yayy! You have 100 poems now!! congrats=)))

That was a very sweet poem . The ending was so unexpected ,Really keeps the readers attention .Great poem

Great poem! the begining reminded me of being bipolar... just me i guess lol. you really pulled off the excitement, and nervousness that comes with the first date! awesome!

Can't even breathe
losing so much sleep
i'm falling again
falling in so deep

dats my favorite part. I love ur poem, ur rhymes are perfect, and i love ur format. its great!

It's always a risk writing about love, but you did it perfectly... good job!

People always asscoiate love with pain...you portray that in this piece...I love how you described how you feel NOW and how you're afraid to feel...it's every lovers fear. Nicely done!!!!! :)