Wow, that is powerful..Great way of expressing yourself, it didn't need a ryhming pattren to stand out and be a master peice..Well done I really liked it x)

Wow, THat was really good!!

*~JAMIE~*

Sorry, to hear you were hurt. You described how it feels to be lied to so well. You can feel the anger, hurt, rage and even hate in this piece. This stanza says it all:
“You were like an addictive drug,
I was hooked the first night we met.
Drugs can kill when overdosed,
So I've had enough of you.”
Well done my friend! Take Care! Brooke~

Hey Great work, keep up the great writting!!!!
Lots O' Love
BloodRedRose

Such powerful emotion... I felt hate, sadness, confusion and lonliness all in one it your words. I like the way you wrote this - very original idea "Lying Is An Addictive Drug"... I liked this line (I know this was serious, I don't know why, but I thought it was funny): "I'll find myself a nicotine patch,
And call it my new girlfriend"
Keep up the great writing, Darien. And keep your head up, hun. If you need to talk, email me, okay?

XxX))Eclipse((XxX

Amazing. i don't usually like non-rhyming poems, but this was better than anything i have seen in a while. good job

I Loved The Title! Your Poem Was So Sincere, I Think Your Title Captured My Attention And Your Poem Captured My Heart It Spoke Heavy Truth 5/5 *Net Hugs And Love* xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Great porm keep up the work x

A little harsh but love hurts and i understand

Wow..this was amazing...this makez so much sense, cuz i've been thru a situation like that...*hugz* i hope ur alrite..keep on writing, i loved this one..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hmm...i thought it was okay. Not the best i've ever read, but it just seems that nothing really stood out to me. However, i'm able to look over that because of the emotion put inside. A love gone sour makes nice inspiration, i think, and this is certainly no exception. I hope to see better work from you, but if you're happy with your poems, then that's all that really matters. If you're that type of person, then you're awesome. Lol.

Take care, and don't let the "addiction" break you down!

//Ari\\

Wow. great poem. loved it. keep up the good work.

Emma5/5

Hey "Pillow"! How are you? I haven't spoken to you in ages. I missed you! How are things going? You have to fill me in on everything since we last spoke. By the way, I totally love this poem (well, I love all your poems) but this one is really great. I already printed a copy b/c it's sooooooo awesome. Anywayz, I got to run, but you keep in touch and keep writing, you do such a super job. Can't wait to read more (or to see you again) Luv Ya "Pillow"!

WOW! This is a very well written poem! Very powerful and full of emotions! Great work....

Love
Haily

-blinks-
I don't really know what to say. I love it, reminds me of my ex, he lied so much to me and used me and it hurt like heck. Now I realize how much he meaned to me and how much I hate him, I can relate sooooo well to this poem. I love it, one of my favorites I have read in a long long time.

So many more competant than I have commented, it hardly seems worth me chipping in my bit.

Therefore, all I'll say is, I agreed with much of sweetenigma (your 6th commentator) had to say. Anything I had to say would simply be a reproduction of that.

The "great write" comment goes without saying in this case.

This poem may be a bit cliche. The topic about love and rugs has been used many times, but I thik yours was the best that I have read so far. I would like for you to write me a book one day, just no because I broke your heart. =)

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Haha...silly me, I meant..."drugs", "think", and "not".

o^_^o

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I liked how you wntwined and voerlapped certain ideas, like the recurred image of the book, in fact my fave. lines were:

"When will your book of lies end?
You need to write something new"

and I loved how in turn YOU write a book about THEM in a spiteful way. i like how you expressed these emotions, you did it in a very unique way when dealing with, as Atomic said, a somewhat used topic.

Super job, this is a great poem. It has a mice flow and good rhymthe.