Amazing Hunny:) I love every thing about it. great work, Can't wait for more you have me on the edge of my seat!

Love you
Jenn x0x0x

That was really good. So much emotion and technique. Loved it! Nice work.

-Jennifer.

I loved the third stanza. It's amazing. Defiantly a 5/5 none to less. keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow! ur poems are so unique and great! loved it would vote it a 10, but i cnt :( lol

love mark xxx

Great job!!
ur poem is great
ur rele talented
all ur poems have a unique style..
its really creative and original
5/5 surely
lostlllsoul*

Wow another amazing one hun xox

I really do love your writing your not into the whole rhyming thing and i like that your more about like making the words really fit together and thats what makes a good writer. you have an awsome talent
much love to ya sarah*

Nice poem, really clever.
I like your style of writing alot.

XXX CICI XXX

Your so very descriptive its amazing. i can picture every word in this poem, i love your writing nice. its so unique

Hey I love this poem it sound like something that I would think about on a dark day or even at night.

I love how it's like darkness yet it's holing on to something dear to it.

Wow! i love this poem! it is extremely well written! 5/5

Hey there,
*silence*.. I really have no words after reading this..
I was just checking out some of ur stuff since you too are aprt of the fishbowl club, btw im the newest member:)
Take care
Monique