Good job i really like it
5/5
- xXlostXx

I LOVE IT, SUCH A GREAT POEM...REALLY NICE! 5/5 GOOD JOB, TAKE CARE AND KEEP WRITING.

Great peom! loved it it had a lot of meaning to it, keep it up and keep your head held high, Lots O' Love BloodRedRose

That was good, i lkd it. 5/5

Hey, this is realy good...i know wut u mean..but stay strong, thingz will get better soon, keep ur head up...take care and keep on writing, you are amazing...you really captured how your feeling..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey claire nice poem : D hehehehehehehehehehe u know who i am hehehehehehehehehe hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha whoooohoooo um....good job.......(this is anononoonononnnnnnoonymous ....ehem)

Once again you your fingers and thoughts are blessed... the best of your work is yet to come...

Have fun doing it....

I like it, you have a good meter in this pem so its well structured. You brought a lot of emotion through your work and its something a lot of pople can relate to. My only critisim here is that some of the lines didn't join together to well, it just sounded like ther was a word missing, but never the less, a good poem.

Babe that was HOT!

Love this poem,,, i now how it feels,, very good one!!!
**doz an1c me?**

Absolutly amazing. once again i tottaly understnad where your coming from. beautifly writting 5/5

Love Tiffani